Angel of Death

Hello there! I'm Angel. This is my first review since I last logged in so it might be a little rusty. For starters, I really liked this and I think ...

This was very enchanting. I really like image your words create. Though this was spontaneous, keep in mind that you don't have to use fancy metaphors to make the poem ...

Hey devin! It's great that you started writing poetry at 13, and I believe that this could be a wonderful wonderful poem, but the formatting is all wrong. As of ...

Hey Hibiscus! First off, I really really like this. You have a wonderful, poetic vocabulary and I would have liked this to be a bit longer, but the short length ...

Hey there StreetRat! I'm Angel and I'll be your reviewer today. :) Interesting poem you have here. I love the emotions that you're trying to get across, but the way ...

Hey Kylan! Long time, no read, eh? This was extremely well-written, as always. And I have to disagree with Firestarter. There is conflict, just not the kind that is visible. ...

Hello Ky! I really liked this, but I feel the poetry was the best part of this piece. The prose was written beautifully but I felt it was cut short ...

Hey Jiggy! I liked this a lot. The first line was a great hook and I couldn't stop reading. It was a great measure of suspense from the beginning, the ...

Hey Ky! I don't have a lot of complaints about this poem. I liked it, a lot. To me it was terrifyingly beautiful. When you think of war, you think ...

Hey Jare! It seems like it's been a long time since I've read anything from you! I loved this poem and I could really relate to it as I was ...

Hey Jiggy! Long time, no read, eh? First off, I liked it. For me it was a mixture of morbidity, fluff (as you say) and awesomeness. I like the concept ...

Hey there Flit! I'm Angel of Death, but please call me Angel. Welcome to YWS! Um, I liked the thoughts and the morals that the MC of the story had. ...

Hey there Sakura! I liked the title, but I was kinda confused. Not that this was confusing or anything, it's just that this doesn't look like a traditional poem i.e ...

Hello again KJ! Glad you told me that there was another part to the story. I was eager to find out what was going to happen next. Okay, I like ...

Hey KJ! I am so excited to be reading something new of yours! Mama said that there would be blood. Really great hook. It sent shivers down my spine! People ...